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Elegance WIP, version 2

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Yeah, I couldn't keep totally away, but I need critique on this before I continue on it. The last version of Elegance. The picture is closer and closer to finish, but I feel I am a little stuck and unsure whether or not it's heading in the right direction.


What you need to know before commenting:
These are the changes I already know I need to do, and which will be in the final picture. So there is no need to mention these unless you disagree that I should change them.
- Darker shadows on the curtains. To mention some of it.
- Cleaner lines and edges, some of them looks quite messy.
- The hand to the right. I'm not really sure exactly what needs to be done though, so suggestions are welcome.
- The hair. With the new, darker background it has become too light and too unnatural, in a way.
- The skirt (or whatever it's called) of the dress. The shadows and folds. At least I think so.
- Texture on the sofa, especially some parts of it.
- The background, especially the lower part.
- The figure looks misplaced now, I think the picture needs to be expanded. At least a bit at the top and some to the left. I'm debating with myself whether or not to add more to the bottom of the picture (more space, that is), I don't really want to do it unless I need to, as the picture is already killing my computer.
- That little part of the background to the right that I forgot to colour with the darker colour.

Anything else I need to fix? Does the leg look weird? I hope it doesn't, because drawing feet with that pose sucks.
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pulbern's avatar
as my headache keeps pounding I have no advice for you at the moment :bleh: can't think straight but I love the colors you've chosen...the earthy greens and all :D